Loneliness - Comments

@ Derek's Wolf Angel
I am very glad!

@ XSoulXLoverX
Thanks This made my day :)

I adore this poem. One thing I admire about poets is those who use rhyme. I admire them because I feel that rhyme can end up being really cheesy and it gets boring. However, with this poem, you manged to use rhyme in a really good way. You made it work and it helped convey the message you wanted to send out. I truly appreciate the message you were trying to send out with this poem. Just from the first stanza alone, I was completely hooked and I was given everything I expected and more.
You chose a topic that many people can relate to and I love that. Being lonely or feeling lonely is something that many of us deal with. I found this poem to be very relateable and I loved that about it. I thought that you took this topic and managed to create something insanely beautiful. You wrote something very profound and that has substance. The words you used were impeccable and so powerful. I think that poem packs a crazy amount of punch and I loved this so much. I thought that this poem had a great balance between the rhyme, line breaks, flow and structure. I think you really know your style and you managed to create something insanely special.
My favorite stanza was "Loneliness is darkness,/It removes all signs of light,/No matter how you fight it,/Your day still seems like night." This was my favorite because it had so much contrast and it was so perfectly written. I thought that you managed to create something so powerful with this stanza. I thought that the use of darkness and light was really nice and I could imagine this. I loved it so much. It stood out to me and I just latched onto this stanza. The entire poem was perfection, but this stanza was even more perfect than the rest. I really like darkness and lightness imagery and ideas, and this stanza did it so wonderfully.
You are a talented writer.