The first and third verse are absolutey amazing and they truly paint a scene in the reader's mind, but the first two lines of the second verse don't match the rest that much, or it might be just me. Still, I could feel the narrator's thoughts and feelings as she kept talking about how she thought of it as love, as trust. Beautiful. <3
The first and third verse are absolutey amazing and they truly paint a scene in the reader's mind, but the first two lines of the second verse don't match the rest that much, or it might be just me. Still, I could feel the narrator's thoughts and feelings as she kept talking about how she thought of it as love, as trust. Beautiful. <3
-Maria.