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  • ButImSmilingAtJalex

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    Wow, this is breath taking.
    November 18th, 2014 at 02:03am
  • jagk-baracat

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    @ fioleeandjalex5ever2
    You are most welcome! (:
    January 15th, 2014 at 11:17pm
  • fioleeandjalex5ever2

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    @ dieuwertjesgtc
    thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it
    January 15th, 2014 at 09:27pm
  • jagk-baracat

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    This is really good! It's quite a tragic, yet beautiful ending, and I like that. I feel like it really stays with you longer when the ending is sad.
    My favourite part was;
    "So Alex took the razor, still on the floor
    and wrapped his arms in red ribbons"
    It's pretty awesome and original. Keep writing!
    January 15th, 2014 at 08:33pm
  • fioleeandjalex5ever2

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    @ brxndneweyes
    I really appreciate the feedback , I'm just starting to try writing so my skills aren't that great, but I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) <3
    January 6th, 2014 at 09:26pm
  • fioleeandjalex5ever2

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    @ HopelessFacination
    thanks :)
    January 6th, 2014 at 09:25pm
  • fioleeandjalex5ever2

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    @ MissReckless123
    THANKYOU *HUGS*
    January 6th, 2014 at 09:24pm
  • DontTakeWithAlcohal

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    Words can not say enough
    January 6th, 2014 at 07:51am
  • DontTakeWithAlcohal

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    Words can not say enough
    January 6th, 2014 at 07:51am
  • fifthghost

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    Jack's note was so sad.

    I feel like, as a structured poem, it does need work, and I always sucked with poems at school, believe me, ugh. But that was a good story. Ouch.
    January 6th, 2014 at 04:57am
  • IAmNotSeen

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    thats awesome!
    January 6th, 2014 at 03:01am
  • JagkDoesItBetter

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    Wow this is amazing! I love it!
    January 6th, 2014 at 02:29am