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  • genocideforjenny

    genocideforjenny (100)

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    Thank you so much for that! Some times I have a tendency to over-do my pieces, anyways I appreciate your input and view :) I am so happy you enjoyed it :) and thank you, I'
    m working on it :p
    January 25th, 2014 at 07:55pm
  • Ayesha C

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    I really like this piece, for a few reasons. It flows very well, easy to read and a great structure. What I like the best though is how you paint your self as the devil. Normally I see writers describe others as the devil and themselves as victims so it was refreshing to read. One point though, if a person is aware of themselves being such a person I.e. a 'devil' then I don't think they're that bad of a person that redemption isn't impossible. Just a thought :) I'm rambling now but yeah I love it! :)
    January 25th, 2014 at 05:36pm
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