You Are Beautiful - Comments

@ PoeticBeauty86
My pleasure :) xx

@ TheShiningSoul
awww thanks I appreciate you taking not only the time to read it but to comment on it as well

I really liked reading this :) The way you describe the love felt between these two characters is purely beautiful and it does really flow like a story! Simply a pleasure to read xxxxx

@ Airi.
Thanks I didn't realize my minor errors but I am glad they are that minor. I know lol it is hard to pull off lengthy poems, and I really wanted this was to flow almost like a story so I am glad it paid off.

@ house of cards.
aww thanks I appreciate it and I am one to rhyme all the time when it comes to my poems I been trying to do something new and I am glad that it came together as it did.

I'm also here as a judge for the Magazine contest!

I really love the sentiment behind this. I'm not one for being super-mooshy or romantic at all but I think everyone yearns for the type of relationship you describe here. It's really lovely to read about it and it is an uplifting poem altogether. The relationship is described so wonderfully that it does make me yearn to know that kind of love myself.

The structure of this really sits well, which can be tricky to pull off in a long poem - especially without a rhyme scheme to tie everything together! Your language and description is really lovely and incredibly easy on the eyes, it's a real treat to read through a poem written as beautifully as this. I didn't notice any errors other than the ones that Airi. already pointed out, so I couldn't give any more criticisms. Lovely!

Hey there~ I'm here as a judge for the Magazine's "Road to Happiness" contest.

This poem was so truly sweet and beautiful. It was a fairly lengthy poem but you made it work well. Lengthy poems can be a bit hard to pull off without losing the reader but I think you accomplished that well. You certainly didn't lose me while reading it! Your choice of words was well...poetic I guess. For lack of a better term aha. It was very wonderful and beautiful the way you used the words that you did. You seemed to have arranged them into very graceful sentences and it truly does do wonders for this poem.

With all of that said, I'm going to be a nitpicky Poem Editor a second here. ^^" I did notice an error in the poem as I was reading it (like I said, nitpicky aha). The error I noticed was in the line every time your around me, where your should be you're instead. I also noticed an error in the line by one to many souls where to should be too.

Okay, I'm done being a nitpicky editor now. c: Those were small errors and definitely didn't take anything away from the poem. It was still a very beautiful and wonderfully written poem. You did very nicely on it. ^^