Nascence Assigned. - Comments

@ kickingchaos
Thanks!!! Btw that wasn't the layout. I changed it...I had just had it for the moment because I was too lazy to make a new one. But I did. Now it's there. :)

May I say that this poem had me thinking? To be honest I wasn't sure what Nascence meant exactly at first, so when I look it up I got a better understanding of your poems meaning. What your poem mostly speaks out about is the variety here on Mibba. What really got my attention in your poem though would have to be the rhyme scheme. It defiantly made your poem flow much better and got the point across much sharper! Your work takes the reader into the stages of what every Mibbian eventually goes through when it comes to various writings. The frustration, of rhymes, the joy of writing conflict, and the sadness of using ones life being cooperated into one's own writing. Your background sets the mood quite well. Wondering in the forest just as many of us wonder on the possibilities of what we can be able to stir up. I like this a lot. Good Job! :)