This made me smile. I really like this poem, with the line "Too lazy for this shit" far more relatable than the line "The Mayonnaise Madame." Like, what is that? It's white but tastes rather bland, so I don't know what that's implying??
The third stanza is far more recognisable than the others, especially with the "war of opinions" line. We're all far too familiar with those wars, or even just the buddings of those wars. It's catchy, I could almost hear it being sung as a song. Now wouldn't that be brilliant?
Good work with this, Mayonnaise Madame. May Mibba continue inspiring you like so.
The third stanza is far more recognisable than the others, especially with the "war of opinions" line. We're all far too familiar with those wars, or even just the buddings of those wars. It's catchy, I could almost hear it being sung as a song. Now wouldn't that be brilliant?
Good work with this, Mayonnaise Madame. May Mibba continue inspiring you like so.