My Writings - Comments

I agree with the comment below, it's amazing that you managed to (purposely) rhyme all five lines and still have the actual line make sense! I like the uplifting, positive view of "I will get better" because that's what a lot of users need to take into account: they might not be better now, but practice will make them better. So I like the message you give in this poem. I also love how you say that your writings are your soul's whispered because that just sounds like something anyone on this site would say because writing is a lot more than just writing, it's expressing ourselves and basically baring ourselves for people to see. This is a cute little limerick and I like it a lot!

Hi there, official Judge's comment for the Mibba Month Limericks Contest!

First of all, it's incredible that you rhymed all five lines! That's really neat, and unique to a limerick since the pattern is normally 1,2,5 rhyme and 3,4 rhyme, which of course you still did. I like the theme of faith and personal discovery throughout which really makes your feelings about the website clear in style and voice. You have a good balance content-wise about your writing personally versus the actual site. Overall it's a cute, short, but still meaningful poem. Congrats on good work and good luck!