First of all, I really like your poem layout. The colors are pretty and the picture is quite fitting. :) Secondly, I have to applaud you on this--it's vague, but it still gets an idea across. I find that a lot of poetry on this site (or a lot of poetry written by amateurs, in general) tells too much. Reveals exactly what they mean. This, on the other hand, makes me think. I have to wonder what it could be that the author is consumed with as he/she is writing. I got the impression that they were confused, which makes the lack of an original title name that much more appropriate. Well-done!
Secondly, I have to applaud you on this--it's vague, but it still gets an idea across.
I find that a lot of poetry on this site (or a lot of poetry written by amateurs, in general) tells too much. Reveals exactly what they mean.
This, on the other hand, makes me think. I have to wonder what it could be that the author is consumed with as he/she is writing. I got the impression that they were confused, which makes the lack of an original title name that much more appropriate.
Well-done!