Forgiveness - Comments

this was a well written poem. You covered the topic of forgiveness extremely well.

I like this poem, it flows effortlessly and it's full of emotion. I understand what your trying to express when you say it’s better to hurt than to be hurt. Unfortunately this is true, people prefer to hurt before their hurt, it like they expect for you to hurt them so the beat you to the punch. The same goes for many other things you stated in your poem like destruction and hate. It's not so easy to forgive others when they've hurt you, it takes a big heart to forgive and it seems like your there. The only thing I would have to disagree with on the content of the poem, who ever this person maybe did need to be forgiven so you could move on; good poem :)

I like this poem, it flows effortlessly and it's full of emotion. I understand what your trying to express when you say it’s better to hurt than to be hurt. Unfortunately this is true, people prefer to hurt before their hurt, it like they expect for you to hurt them so the beat you to the punch. The same goes for many other things you stated in your poem like destruction and hate. It's not so easy to forgive others when they've hurt you, it takes a big heart to forgive and it seems like your there. The only thing I would have to disagree with on the content of the poem, who ever this person maybe did need to be forgiven so you could move on; good poem :)