"That Dream" - Comments

@ PierceMyHeart
Thank you very much. After all he and I have been through, I'm almost positive I'm one of the very few and very lucky to have found their soul mate. He's the reason I wake up with a smile every day and I'm very grateful to him in more ways than I can say, and considering sweet poems arent my normally forte, I'm glad it was well received. I'll fix the layout. Thank you again!

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Thank you so much for the comment, and the recommendation of the layout. I'll mess with the color, so it's more legible. I'm very glad you enjoyed the poem, and, yes, I am very much in love. ^^ Also, your favorite lines are mine too!

Wow! What a beautiful poem, the flow of the poem is perfection. How fitting the title, the poem is an expression of love, and adoration, if I wouldn't know any better I say that your describing your soul mate. I love the whole poem but I especially like how you describe how this person fills you with happiness and warmth, they are the pulse of your heart. The rhyme flow is terrific. The background is beautiful although, I suggest that you change it’s or change the color of the text because it's hard to read as is now, simply brilliant :)

I suggest changing the layout because the text isn't visible at the parts where the purple color is too dark. Other than that, I find your poem to be a nice one and obviously the narrator is in love. I like it.

These are my favorite parts:

You're the gentle softness I sink into,
The truth I've found hidden in the lies.

You're the bliss, the love that fills my heart,
The paradise I know I can only have with you.

-Maria. :)