Look in the Mirror - Comments

My favorite part has to be this one:

You don't know how you ended up here
Waiting for hope that never came

I absolutely adore the way you showed us the fear and love in this poem. The last stanza was a great way to end it and make us look deep into this friendship. I highly recommend this to others for a good read and because I don't want to repeat that have already been said, I will just say that I absolutely have to agree with PierceMyHeart.

-Maria. :)

Nice poem, the flow was nice. I like how you say your friend has no one to blame, and how they seek peace with booze, well we all know that drinking isn't the answer to one's problems it only creates more problem for yourself and others. I also like how you express how what your friend is doing to themself effects you. I think they rhyme flow is good, I especially like how you express in at the end of the poem that your friend self examine themself. Your poem express your love for your friend clearly. I like your design again, nice poem.