Paper Hearts - Comments

I like how you explain that love is only a concept conceived through the mind. There is a sense that the narrator may have been ignorant or oblivious about something but later something happened and they then realized the true nature of things.

I like how you explain that love is just a concept conceived through the mind. There is a sense of a person who may have been oblivious or ignorant and then something happened to make them realize the true nature of things.

I can sense the darkness in this poem, and I like it to be honest. Because most sad and dark poems, to me, are one of the most “real” poems. I can see a lot of true emotion. I can see a lot of, “I feel like crap”. Like, there is a lot of sadness that really comes from the heart that is pretty relatable to me at the moment.

I also really liked:
Thin hearts, fragile hearts, strong hearts, paper hearts...
everything is an idea that blossoms inside your minds.
A weak heart is a weak mind,
then, a paper heart can only be a paper mind.

It was, pretty straight forward and honest and I like it. Also, I noticed you feel hurt, I hope you feel better!