I really like this! I'll be the first to admit that I don't always get poetry, but this was really interesting.
I liked the rhyming, always have a thing for rhyming , and the last two lines were my favourite. I liked that it almost seemed like it was saying that everyone views savage in the same way, because it's out-of-the-box, even if they don't agree on what average is, which was a cool way to think about things.
I liked the rhyming, always have a thing for rhyming , and the last two lines were my favourite. I liked that it almost seemed like it was saying that everyone views savage in the same way, because it's out-of-the-box, even if they don't agree on what average is, which was a cool way to think about things.
BUT YES. Very lovely