Your Not - Comments

@ ninahx
Yeah it really is sad! Like imagine being friends with an ex, and when its you 2 everything is ok, but when the meeting guy is around you're non existent. Tried captivating what really happens, and how a person can feel. Idk ha-ha

P.s Yes, this is good. I like it! :) The first lines gave me the impression that the person is over their loved one, but when I read more I realized that actually this poem is really sad and heartbreaking. That actually the person is so broken and hurt, questioning himself and unsure of everything. This is really good, I love the questions and the last verse is excellent. Good job with this one! ^_^