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  • Everything2007

    Everything2007 (100)

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    @ petra ral
    Thank you for the detailed comment. It's nice to know that someone still finds my poem's worth reading.
    October 2nd, 2015 at 02:53pm
  • honeyjoons

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    What I love about this is how simple it is. It's only a few lines, but those lines are more than enough. It's super relatable an I feel like it is exactly what people are thinking when they start to realize that they love someone. Love can be terrifying and you can tell yourself that you shouldn't do it because it's dangerous and anything could happen and everything can go wrong, but you're taking a chance anyway and pretty much just hoping it works out which this nicely lays out very simply which is why I enjoyed reading this so much! In Love
    October 2nd, 2015 at 05:26am