Okay first of all, I adore this layout. I can never make poem layouts work how I want them to.
I love how this is just like an organized chaos of thoughts. You can see the difference of emotion with each different time which I think is super realistic. Emotions often get written as kind of a chronological thing, where they follow this template, but that's really not how it works and I love that you reflected that so well here.
I just adore how well you write poetry. Lovely job!
I love how this is just like an organized chaos of thoughts. You can see the difference of emotion with each different time which I think is super realistic. Emotions often get written as kind of a chronological thing, where they follow this template, but that's really not how it works and I love that you reflected that so well here.
I just adore how well you write poetry. Lovely job!