If Only You Were Peter Pan - Comments

  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

    Lady Nikki Nightmare (215)

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    This is fierce. It feels very emotional. I love the stanza "you take shelter from the cold / in a blanket of yesterday's news / find lies to tell yourself / fabrications of who you'd like to be." Yeah, that's a pretty powerful piece of writing.
    June 21st, 2017 at 09:56pm
  • Ghoul Scouts

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    Beautifully written! In Love
    June 21st, 2017 at 01:56am