Swan Song - Comments

  • cruciatus.

    cruciatus. (455)

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    This is such a beautiful poem and I almost teared up while I was reading it. The words read almost like a short song, and it would be easy to imagine a melody behind the poem. I particularly enjoyed the third sestet. It really changed the feel of the writing for me, going from an almost sweet sadness to a very real anger. It was beautiful. I found myself wishing that there was more to the poem, but only because it was such a great thing to read.
    September 12th, 2017 at 08:01pm