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  • Unown

    Unown (185)

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    Oof, I adore this - the questioning, the sense of community, the glimmer of hope among the sad truths. It's written unusually, yet it flows so well. I love the juxtaposition of 'so start' being placed at the very end. It's so uplifting. Nice!
    November 5th, 2018 at 05:31pm