Christmas - Comments

There should be a comma after whispers of children, seperating the words "children" and "and."
There shouldn't be a comma after rooftop. Speaking of which, "roof top" should be rooftop. And "elf's" should be elves. "Shelfs" should also be shelves.
I assume you mean sparkle instead of "sparkler."
"of carolers sing" is just... wrong. It could be of carolers singing or of the caroler's song, but what you have isn't sensible.
The should be a comma after "the best of all".

I didn't get the format. The whole poem was basically a list of good things about Christmas. Not a huge fan of Christmas or your poem.

Thats a really nice christmas poems.
lol trust me ive read some bad ones.
But I liked the imagery and the overall happy feel to it.

Editing Suggestions: unless it is a possessive, "elf's" should go to "elves", and "shelfs" should be "shelves". Also, should "sparkler" be without the "r" on the end?

I really enjoy the imagery that leads into the happiness of Christmastime. :) Nicely done.