Your poetry is intriguing bring the reader into a world created in a few stanzas.
That is what true poetry is, and you have achieved it.
I like the stanza with the mirror and the lipstick, I can imagine the yellow lights flickering and the mirror showing the reflection of what he has become.
That is what true poetry is, and you have achieved it.
I like the stanza with the mirror and the lipstick, I can imagine the yellow lights flickering and the mirror showing the reflection of what he has become.
Your writing it very powerful.