It always amazes me when young writers are so incredibly talented. You haven't posted any new poems in quite a while. It baffles me to think how you could have improved... since I don't know how one can get better at being the best. But I'm sure you have done it.
This is an incredible poem. I love your wording and the rhythm you use. You repeat certain lines, sometimes with altered endings without interrupting the flow of the poem. I see many poems where others attempt that and cheapen the poem.
I am simply in awe. You remind me why it's so great to be a writer. The power of words and the emotions it evokes and how it serves and a voice when someone can't find the words. You're so inspiring.
This is an incredible poem. I love your wording and the rhythm you use. You repeat certain lines, sometimes with altered endings without interrupting the flow of the poem. I see many poems where others attempt that and cheapen the poem.
I am simply in awe. You remind me why it's so great to be a writer. The power of words and the emotions it evokes and how it serves and a voice when someone can't find the words. You're so inspiring.