Selfish - Comments

This poem was shorter but didn't loose it's meaning.
It describes the world of today and how people believe they should be living.

The use of complex words show your maturity and understanding of what the world has become; at least in your eyes.

Hii, don't know you but I think this is a really good poem. Even if I do not understand many of the words :)
Keep it up.
Nicola xx