A bit more prose than poetry; or a bit more emotion than structure. Either way, it's alive, my friend.
This was great:
"When I face you in pieces."
That single line! I'm captivated by it. <3
It's so nice to read a poem about loss, too, but without the angsty teenage garbage. This I like very much. Well done!
This was great:
"When I face you in pieces."
That single line! I'm captivated by it. <3
It's so nice to read a poem about loss, too, but without the angsty teenage garbage. This I like very much. Well done!