Saint James Lutherman Cemetery - Comments

  • florence

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    This poem easily paints a picture in your head, and I like how it can still be deep without having that confusing feel to it. This would make a great story, haha I can just picture something like this taking place in real life, so much so that I wonder of it did really happen.
    March 13th, 2010 at 03:37pm
  • xXxMaggotxXx

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    aww, this is so sweet, and nice. I like how you made it seem so, I dunno, kinda dark but still light you know? And I love how you constructed the last stanza.
    September 22nd, 2008 at 05:51am
  • head full of words

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    this is amazing
    i love the rythem it has =]
    September 17th, 2008 at 04:29am
  • Dark Magical Dreams

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    awws i know how this feels keep writin its good
    September 16th, 2008 at 04:25am
  • BloodShotEyes

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    amazing poem, I love it
    September 16th, 2008 at 01:03am
  • Sight-Of-Saturn

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    wow,,,, dude,,
    that is amazing!!!
    >.<
    and Apocalyptica made it all the better,,,
    September 15th, 2008 at 11:59pm
  • midnight-typer

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    nice poem love the idea and scene setting
    September 15th, 2008 at 11:33pm