Another Nomad Soul - Comments

This poem is very very very good, haha.
I like the line "It's cold enough that my heart can beat almost painlessly."
I also loved the line "It's funny, I lost my mind, but nothing at all went wrong."
The only thing I didn't like about this poem were the few grammatical errors, haha. But I'm just easily put off by that sort of thing.

I agree with the comment under me, it's really good. and the 9th stanza is just simply breathtaking. =).

its rly good its now a song lolz it would be one amazing song or poem either way its fuckin awsome oh craop i wasn't supposed to swear :( lolz

I just read through this twice, and although I'm sure there are still some subtle things I'm missing, overall it was well written and I liked it. On the flip side though, the piece strikes me as too self indulgent.