Wow, dude
I like it.. but as far as you've told me.. your dad is in no war and hasn't been
So this means that you're a really good writer, you can fake emotion that you haven't experienced, and doesn't sound like crap!
This is really good, and you should have our writing techer look at it, seriously. You would get a lot of praise out of him for this. And one of the people that sit behind us too. You need to show this to him, seriously. You're a really good writer, and you need to let it be known instead of turning in the mild stuff you do. Everyone says I'm the good writer, but I think we both have equal talents. And from what I've heard, that's pretty damn good!! Let it be known dude
I like it.. but as far as you've told me.. your dad is in no war and hasn't been
So this means that you're a really good writer, you can fake emotion that you haven't experienced, and doesn't sound like crap!
This is really good, and you should have our writing techer look at it, seriously. You would get a lot of praise out of him for this. And one of the people that sit behind us too. You need to show this to him, seriously. You're a really good writer, and you need to let it be known instead of turning in the mild stuff you do. Everyone says I'm the good writer, but I think we both have equal talents. And from what I've heard, that's pretty damn good!! Let it be known dude