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  • stainglassmasquerade

    stainglassmasquerade (100)

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    "So you keep me caged.
    Caged in a orange pill bottle,
    And now all I can feel is rage,"

    Those lines are my favorite. They are SO powerful. Well done. (:
    December 2nd, 2009 at 10:39pm
  • bunneyoh

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    yay for makos emotions
    March 27th, 2009 at 10:40pm
  • cStorm 204

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    that is a really nice poem, deep, full of emotions.........

    its really good, you should keep at it
    February 25th, 2009 at 10:27pm
  • selfdamnation

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    wow cooper....:(....thats a really good poem...im jealous but i love it
    January 23rd, 2009 at 10:31pm
  • Skin and Bones

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    Dayyyymmmmm
    Mako i'm in love with this.
    keep it up!
    January 23rd, 2009 at 10:14pm
  • X-Kitten-X

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    woah
    that's deep
    i sort of understand how you feel
    January 23rd, 2009 at 10:01pm