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  • TongueTiednTerrified

    TongueTiednTerrified (100)

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    Great poem.
    I really liked it, you did a good job.
    January 4th, 2010 at 03:22am
  • love potion

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    Nice!
    March 16th, 2009 at 04:50am
  • quinn allman's hair.

    quinn allman's hair. (110)

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    This poem is great. :D
    Though in the first line, there's a small spelling error in heart.

    Smiley
    February 11th, 2009 at 04:44am
  • i defy you stars.

    i defy you stars. (250)

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    I like the poem, but you made some spelling errors: 'meat' / 'meet', 'sine' /'sign', 'pane' / 'pain', 'pleas'/'please', 'fell' / 'feel'.
    I hope that was helpful!
    Good job!
    January 30th, 2009 at 02:07pm
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