I [i]really[/i] like the metaphores, you really have that going for you. It opens the eyes to some many things, ya know?
I was kind of distraced on how there was no capitalization or punctuation, because like other forms of writing, grammar is just as important in poetry. It's so much easier to read.
Other than that minor problem, I really liked this^^
I was kind of distraced on how there was no capitalization or punctuation, because like other forms of writing, grammar is just as important in poetry. It's so much easier to read.
Other than that minor problem, I really liked this^^