Slow Dance - Comments

  • LadyofShalott

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    The initial moral is lovely and plus it has a steady and good meter!
    May 1st, 2009 at 01:46am
  • iluvgospel4eva

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    luv the poem. it has a really great moral. ur a good writer.
    April 29th, 2009 at 02:48pm
  • Crunch.Spazzlette.

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    This is reaallly good. I love it; completely. It's shocking no one else commented, because this poem is amazing. I love it. So much.
    April 29th, 2009 at 02:04am
  • pepper potts.

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    this poem is right on with many points in life, I like it!!! but for some reason it makes me feel a bit sad.
    April 29th, 2009 at 12:40am
  • line that stuff up

    line that stuff up (105)

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    I like the last two lines especially. It was a quite witty poem. It wasn't all thrown around. You actually thought it out...or so it seems.
    April 29th, 2009 at 12:15am
  • Bee!

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    Awesome poem!!!
    Love it<3
    So bubbly but still so sad!!!! (Y)

    Bee<3 xo
    April 29th, 2009 at 12:07am