I liked the lines ‘Caring so little/Like geese in formation/Too caught up in the moment /We forget whats underneath’ and ‘Dear World,/Open your eyes’. It was a great way to end the poem. Good job (y)
I usually like to add some concric to my comments...but I genuinely can’t think of anything to say...perhaps it could have been a lil longer? The length definitely suited the subject...I’m just greedy and would have liked to have read more =P
Well done with this, keep up the good work =D
I liked the lines ‘Caring so little/Like geese in formation/Too caught up in the moment /We forget whats underneath’ and ‘Dear World,/Open your eyes’. It was a great way to end the poem. Good job (y)
I usually like to add some concric to my comments...but I genuinely can’t think of anything to say...perhaps it could have been a lil longer? The length definitely suited the subject...I’m just greedy and would have liked to have read more =P
Well done with this, keep up the good work =D