In Circles We Fly… - Comments

Woah!
Holy crap this is good.
You have obviously put in alot of effort into this and really thought about it.
This is brilliant.

This is fantastic. Very deep and it's obvious you spent a lot of time thinking this through.

Wow.
I love this.
Totally worth remembering xD

Seriously, though, that's really powerful. The imagery and metaphors... it's awesome.

Wow this was really good. I loved it!

[i]In circles we fly, for we never learn[/i] <- I love this line. Your use of "..." also pulls the reader to know what happens next. It's clear you spent a lot of time working on this; it's absolutely amazing and deep. Locking doors, windows appearing...awesome use of metaphors.