Time is running out

Remember this
In faithful bliss
That time will take its toll.
The heart will beat
And eyes will fleet
And the world moves on its roll.

The place in here
Sheds faithful tears
But soon all not will be.
In modern times
Kids sing their chimes
Knowing not of the harmony.

The sound will come
And dreams will run
And time will soon run out.
And remember this
In faithful bliss
That death will take all doubt.

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