Roller Coaster.

I write millions of songs, but I haven't posted any online before. I decided to write a new song and upload it on mibba to hear critical things about it. The critique the song, the more I can improve it. Comments are love.

Roller Coaster

(7/31/09 7:29 - 7:39PM)

Oh, Oh, Oh.
Woah, Woooah.

We're going round and round.
Troubling,
Hard to figure this out.

[CHORUS]
We're on a roller coaster now.
No control on whatever's ahead.
Let's just go for the ride.
Whether or not we'll be here tomorrow.
Roller coaster, round and round.
Our love's a roller coaster now.
[END OF CHORUS]

Everytime I scream,
You're always calm.
Beside me,
You're always there.

[Repeat Chorus]

It's a shame.
How we used to be.
Finishing one another's sentences.
Holding me during the night.
Forgivable fights.

[Repeat Chorus 2x]

No control on whatever's ahead.
Let's just go for the ride.
I'm alongside the tide.
The current reels me in.

Oh, Oh.
Now we're breakable.
Fragile, that's your heart.
You're devilish grin, unforgettable.

Everytime you scream,
I'm always calm.
Beside you,
I'm never there.

OH!

[Reapeat Chorus]

It's a shame.
How we used to be.