Open Your Eyes Wide
An open wound,
A closed off shell,
Do you know what its like,
To be in hell?
I lose all control,
As i lie on the floor,
And inside my heart,
I know im bleeding for sure.
Your arms wide open,
You hold me tight,
But all you do,
Is bitch, scream and fight.
If i cried right now would you notice?
If i died right now would you care?
If i just keep screaming my pain,
Would you even notice i'm there?
Lottie XXX
I wrote it a few months ago and wondered if anyone thought it could be improved!
Constructive criticism welcome :D
A closed off shell,
Do you know what its like,
To be in hell?
I lose all control,
As i lie on the floor,
And inside my heart,
I know im bleeding for sure.
Your arms wide open,
You hold me tight,
But all you do,
Is bitch, scream and fight.
If i cried right now would you notice?
If i died right now would you care?
If i just keep screaming my pain,
Would you even notice i'm there?
Lottie XXX
I wrote it a few months ago and wondered if anyone thought it could be improved!
Constructive criticism welcome :D