Dear Bryttani

I'm gonna tell you how you make me feel.
The way you make my life seem so unreal.
The way you broke the walls around myself made of steel.
How I would kill to spend time with you.
Even if it was for just one meal.
About how you make even the biggest wounds heal.
You fill me with happiness from my head to my heel.
I could even see you being the one, to whom i'll kneel.
And ask those four words, with a hope of the slightest appeal.

It's unbelievable bryttani.
How you made me fall so quickly.
My heart no longer just mine to carry.
How when I see you I become so clumsy.
Just because your so damn pretty.
All I want is to hold you tightly

You asked for something nice.
This'll probly put me on thin ice.
But to be precise.
You have my heart in a vice.
I don't know if I will suffice.
But please dont treat my heart.
Like a useless device.
For how I feel about you.
Truely has no price.

I wrote this for a girl I really like, but im debating wether to show her or not, so show her yes/no?