Looking at you through the rain

Looking at you through the rain,

Feeling cold but not from the chill,

I think of you not in my life,

And I suddenly start to feel ill,

After the fact I finally say it,

How I feel about you and me,

How through thick and thin I see us together,

And how we’ll always be,

But I caught you too late love,

You’d already packed your bags,

I should’ve seen the warning signs,

Should’ve seen the flags,

And now you’re walking out the door,

On this cold and windy day,

Lust leaving me standing in this empty doorway,

With nothing more to say,

So as you’re getting in your car,

I think back on what I said,

I wish I could take it back now love,

Too bad I’m already dead…
♠ ♠ ♠
inspired by a short story i read the other day, i like it, but tell me what you folk think. also, think "leftangry/caraccident" do it.