ENG 3U #1 - Oh Haughty Humanity

Minutes blurring into days...

Lonely days

Becoming empty weeks

And weeks drifting into lifeless months.

Lonely,
For all humanity has rejected me.

Empty,
Without a friendly face or warm smile.

Lifeless,
Even my Creator cannot bear to look at me
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I am writing a series of poems for my 3U english class..
They are mainly to be based on the themes from Mary Shelley's Frankenstein,
So if anyone knows the novel well maybe they could offer their opinion?
Thanks (: