" Unknown"

Unknown

Through my mind went everything
Thoughts from hers to his
Reasonable to unbearable
Blocking them out is what seems right
Though through all those minds
One stands out from the crowd
A single one like a star in a black sky
Unable to see what is said
Never have I crossed this
Through centuries that I’ve been through
Frustration runs through me
Why her only her
As if immune to the extraordinary power I hold
I wonder, as any human would
Even though I am far from that concept,
Try to get closer
I do, emotionally and mentally.

More doors seem to close than to open
Something strange
I feel temptation
Anger mostly at myself or at the one that stands out
Confusion rushes through me

As time passes, I notice that I cannot pull away
The feelings inside rip through me
Not even the strength I hold can stop it.
As I keep on, I notice I cannot live without
The one and only person that carries the sweetest sent through her veins and
Body
Strangely, I can resist. I control myself

Because without that heart beating
Inside her body with all her tempting
And unbearable sense, I would not be.

Without her nothing of me.

As danger lurks inside of me
And innocence through her,
We came together and forever.
The strong pull between us cannot ever be broken
No power, strength or insanity can come between us

Still I cannot figure out how this came
But I will never regret all these feelings and thoughts
Unknown.
By: Grace Darcy Palmieri
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So, another poem , that's three in one day!

Sorry if the poem is about twilight and stuff, but it was a class assignment and well its pretty old from almost two years ago but i had it on save, so i thought i would post it, if you don't want to read it you don't have to but please dooo!!!!

I want to see if i portrayed the right idea and if it has the right mood and stufff, tell me what you think.
Thanks soo much!
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P.S.: any form of criteria is welcome!