Desire love lively

love is a flower
that brings to your desire...
but will sometimes bring you
back into the fire
and I say love is somtimes silly
but somtimes serious just like dreams
dreams come true
so follow your favorite things.

Love is a flower, that is so delicate..
but you can not see it..
just feel it
and if you are careful
your love will be a big tower.
and will fit

chase you dreams it will come true and
your love will be desired to fit you
don't wish on a wishing well
just belive in yourself

Love is so delecate
treat it with respect
don't say it isn't true
the consequenses will be on you.

Don't say you regret how your feeling
Love is so attractive and appealing.

love is fire, but bring to your desire
you can never touch a match but still start a fire
don't be fooled by love you see
follow your dreams and it will be

First shot, first kiss
First Swing,First miss
Keep trying your love will come true
keep trying love and it will soon fit you.
♠ ♠ ♠
This is my first poem so critism is ok, but not too mean. just suggestions.Thanks!