A Warning for The Love Seekers (Rewrite)
Love is a word,
Love is a feeling,
Everyone feels,
And if they don't,
They wish they did,
It's a topic,
That's engraved so much,
Confused feeling,
On the hearts,
Of poets who write,
Thousands of poems,
And on the voices,
Of talented musicians,
Who echo their pain,
Into thousands songs,
These thought out words,
These carefully plucked tunes,
Are thousands of warnings,
Watch out for the pain,
They all say,
Watch for the breaking,
Of your fragile heart,
I never quite heard it,
Was never listening,
Long enough to tell,
So I tripped myself,
Into a little bit of love,
I looked into his blue eyes,
And they made me fall,
Right quick splat,
Into a puddle of the dangerous,
Four lettered word,
And into the arms of a boy,
Who was waiting there,
This whole time,
Just to catch me,
And I tried,
To pull myself out,
But all it took,
Was a meeting,
Of the eyes,
And I'd splat back in,
And all it took was a chat,
His voice so very deep,
And I never ever,
Tried to escape,
That puddle again,
But all of a sudden,
He got up,
Climbed out,
And left the love scene,
Now my heart pounds,
Trying so very hard,
To give my body,
Blood so it won't,
Shut down from the pain,
So it won't die,
To get away from it all,
I yearn for his voice,
I call out,
Asking and pleading,
For his touch,
Just once more,
I wanted,
I yearned,
And I begged,
To be in love,
But this pain,
It's driving me insane,
Love is not worth,
The ache and the pain,
And now I believe,
Every break up song,
Every warning,
Put into the universe
By a withering,
Crying,
Pained soul,
Here is my own,
Stay away from the puddle,
Of the dangerous,
Four letter word,
Stay away from the people,
Who wait there,
To catch you,
And hold you close,
For a promised eternity,
At single glance,
You'll know them,
They carry the love,
In their laughter,
And with the love,
Along comes the pain,
When they decide,
To go away,
And leave you,
Wondering what eternity,
Really is.
This is a rewrite, the origional is still up if you want to take a look. It's at the very bottom so have fun scrolling down! And if you've read both (if you haven't go read the origional and then come back) tell me which one you dig more.
Love is a feeling,
Everyone feels,
And if they don't,
They wish they did,
It's a topic,
That's engraved so much,
Confused feeling,
On the hearts,
Of poets who write,
Thousands of poems,
And on the voices,
Of talented musicians,
Who echo their pain,
Into thousands songs,
These thought out words,
These carefully plucked tunes,
Are thousands of warnings,
Watch out for the pain,
They all say,
Watch for the breaking,
Of your fragile heart,
I never quite heard it,
Was never listening,
Long enough to tell,
So I tripped myself,
Into a little bit of love,
I looked into his blue eyes,
And they made me fall,
Right quick splat,
Into a puddle of the dangerous,
Four lettered word,
And into the arms of a boy,
Who was waiting there,
This whole time,
Just to catch me,
And I tried,
To pull myself out,
But all it took,
Was a meeting,
Of the eyes,
And I'd splat back in,
And all it took was a chat,
His voice so very deep,
And I never ever,
Tried to escape,
That puddle again,
But all of a sudden,
He got up,
Climbed out,
And left the love scene,
Now my heart pounds,
Trying so very hard,
To give my body,
Blood so it won't,
Shut down from the pain,
So it won't die,
To get away from it all,
I yearn for his voice,
I call out,
Asking and pleading,
For his touch,
Just once more,
I wanted,
I yearned,
And I begged,
To be in love,
But this pain,
It's driving me insane,
Love is not worth,
The ache and the pain,
And now I believe,
Every break up song,
Every warning,
Put into the universe
By a withering,
Crying,
Pained soul,
Here is my own,
Stay away from the puddle,
Of the dangerous,
Four letter word,
Stay away from the people,
Who wait there,
To catch you,
And hold you close,
For a promised eternity,
At single glance,
You'll know them,
They carry the love,
In their laughter,
And with the love,
Along comes the pain,
When they decide,
To go away,
And leave you,
Wondering what eternity,
Really is.
This is a rewrite, the origional is still up if you want to take a look. It's at the very bottom so have fun scrolling down! And if you've read both (if you haven't go read the origional and then come back) tell me which one you dig more.