Louis...

Every Night I wake
With a thirst that sleighs

Food I dont Eat,
But blood is my feast

I dont hate love
I just dont love
For everyone Dies,
All except me, Dies

I wish there was
someone for me to love,

Doomed forever to this world
Isnt there a love for me, to adore?
♠ ♠ ♠
Please comment!!! i need pointers on how to write poems. So comment away. I take any criticism, so dont worry if its a bit meanish. = ) = )