And Finially, I Die.

Another from INO Proof
Everyone that read this one at my school liked it... in 7th grade lol... But it's still one of my favorites.. Feedback?

there was water rushing in over my body
my vision was blurry i could see straight
i was running out of air
finially i blacked out
then i heard voices all around me
they sound sad and frightened
i could hear an amblulance
then i stood up although my body didnt follow me
i could see my family and friends
they we all crying
i didnt want to leave them behind
i didnt want to follow the light that was beaming over me
i layed back down, into my body
then i felt the shock of life come back into me