My creative writing class project
yep i was to know how people feel about it on here. i love it ,but it may suck so let me know how you like it!!
The rules for the project are:
1. I must use words that remind people of the color RED.(ex. Blood, revenge, heart, maroon, and so on)
2. i could not use names( nun of the people could have names)
3. it need to be a short story that people could make inferences on what happened to the main caricature)
4.It couldn't really have a ending( so people could make there own ending)
My teacher is SO weird but i love him for that part!
so here it what i got!:
Her SCARLET hair flowed over her shoulder. Her baby like face, flushed as she let out a mushroom cloud of smoke from her mouth before she brought the FLAME lit cigarette back to her CHERRY lips. She sucked in and the tip of the cigarette glowed a CRIMSON color. She sighed and laid her head in the BRICK wall. She had been waiting for the music to stop in her best friends MAROON colored apartment. Her best friend had not been herself. The FLAME that was once been in her eyes were now gone and all that was left was black ash. She believed it was him making her this way but her friend insisted it wasn’t. Pictures of the night he had taken everything from her still played over and over again in her mind.
The more her HEART beat, and the more the BLOOD flowed in her veins, the more vivid and clear the pictures in her mind became. She wanted to make him pay for what he did. The fact that he was with her best friend in that apartment right at this moment made her feel ill. He never got what was coming. So every night she would just sit out side the MAROON colored apartment just letting her SCARLET hair flow in the wind. Waiting and waiting for the perfect time for REVENGE.
The rules for the project are:
1. I must use words that remind people of the color RED.(ex. Blood, revenge, heart, maroon, and so on)
2. i could not use names( nun of the people could have names)
3. it need to be a short story that people could make inferences on what happened to the main caricature)
4.It couldn't really have a ending( so people could make there own ending)
My teacher is SO weird but i love him for that part!
so here it what i got!:
Her SCARLET hair flowed over her shoulder. Her baby like face, flushed as she let out a mushroom cloud of smoke from her mouth before she brought the FLAME lit cigarette back to her CHERRY lips. She sucked in and the tip of the cigarette glowed a CRIMSON color. She sighed and laid her head in the BRICK wall. She had been waiting for the music to stop in her best friends MAROON colored apartment. Her best friend had not been herself. The FLAME that was once been in her eyes were now gone and all that was left was black ash. She believed it was him making her this way but her friend insisted it wasn’t. Pictures of the night he had taken everything from her still played over and over again in her mind.
The more her HEART beat, and the more the BLOOD flowed in her veins, the more vivid and clear the pictures in her mind became. She wanted to make him pay for what he did. The fact that he was with her best friend in that apartment right at this moment made her feel ill. He never got what was coming. So every night she would just sit out side the MAROON colored apartment just letting her SCARLET hair flow in the wind. Waiting and waiting for the perfect time for REVENGE.