Decieved
Lover please, your lip’s deceive me:
As we lay, you’re arms around me.
You whisper lies, my fears escape me,-
You made me safe, your heart deceived me.
You loved, dreamed, cherished and adored me:
But in the end you left me, damned me!
As we lay, you’re arms around me.
You whisper lies, my fears escape me,-
You made me safe, your heart deceived me.
You loved, dreamed, cherished and adored me:
But in the end you left me, damned me!
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I did this for fun really. Pick and pull at it the way you like, tell me the do's and the donts. I want to know what is wrong and write so I can better my poetic writing.Thank you
Lady Reverie