Camden

Okay so in English we had to do a sort of like poem about our ''Special Place''. Now I love Camden with all my heartI will even after the stupid bitches decide to knock it down. So I decided to write about that. Hope you enjoy it.... Comments please?
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As you walk down the crowded roads towards the locke, the sweet almost hypmotizing smell fills your sensitive nostrils, carrying you away like something in a dream.
The bitter wind blows rattling the metal poles holding up the vast amounts of stalls, t-shirts hanging on them blow slightly in the wind.

The trudging of their boots make their way through the mass amounts of people,
Their hair is stuck on ends, with piercings roaming over their faces,
They hind under black, occassionally in the corner, blending in with the shadows like a hidden London Tribe.

The station hides behind scaffolding it's dark and sheltered with birds,
Their beady black eyes looking down on you as you walk towards the croosing,
The traffic roars rouond the traffic lights at the turn of green and frightens the birds lined up on the pelican crossing fly away.

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It's not quite finished yet though. Erm...What do you think?