Heroic Lovers

Tongue tied passion turning into disaster,
No escape when your heart beat starts to fly,
Tumbling breath's bury your words faster,
Hell overrides hope when the road leads you awry.

Days hunt through the nights forever longer,
Feared whispers lurking around in the dark,
To love is nothing more but to die stronger,
Scarring you with an everlasting mark.

Your tears are leave nothing but a flood,
Hidden emotions remain as today's game,
Tracking your thoughts with a single droplet of blood,
You've become to be known as the dying flame.

Goodbye to heroic lovers with meaningful intentions,
Hello to overbearing grief with an relief to tension.
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Please comment after you readdddd. I'm not good at writing sonnets, and I want to know if this acceptable to hand in for my poetry project.