Over-Rated

Everyone loves you for your looks,
You aren’t known for your personality,
It’s really al-fucking-right sweetie,
Because no one will remember your beautiful face in the end.
We all know that you’re pretending,
The façade you put on every morning fools nobody except for yourself,
We all know that you’re a fake,
You’re becoming the one thing you once hated,
It’s over-rated.
♠ ♠ ♠
This is only the first verse, I'm not even finished with the song yet.
But I'm really pretty nervous, because I've never really written a "song" before.
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